My wife and I came home after celebrating the Thanksgiving holiday with family. I'm about shot, we've been together for about two straight days. Everything went ok because I refused to overreact to my wife or our families.
After we walked in the door it started, we got to teasing each other a little about eating so much. The teasing got a little rough and my wife got kind of nasty. I asked her how she could act the way she was acting when she did me the same way or worse. Finally I told her I didn't appreciate her mean attitude because I didn't do her that way when she teased me. It kind of pissed me off the way she was acting, so I opened my laptop up and wrote a poem called "Joking," to help deal with the situation. After I wrote the poem one of our peers decided to throw a slur at it which I did not appreciate because after kissing our families butts and my wifes behind, I was in no mood for slurs, honest reviews but not slurs. So goes the poetic psychology behind this poem.
I run to my pen and ink, too poetically word what I think. Maybe not the stupid, but moreso the cupid. I believe in love and peace, not being led by the devils lease. I might verse in the best, try to forget the stupid rest. Even though I might be pissed, I try not to turn butt to be kissed.
All the time I'm writing, I try to ink away fighting. But it's hard to pull out a tooth, cover up the real truth. My poetry contains a lot of psychology, it helps guide my biology, then there'll be less apology.
Don't slur me in review, I might come for your butt too chew. My poetry you may not like, in which case take a hike. Don't force out Mr Hide, bring out my bad side. I don't write for attention, nor do I need honorable mention.
I might already be dealing, trying not to start too squealing. Or acting like a fool, with the devil on the drool. Problems is I might flip, go on a mean evil trip. Trip out on your azz, so my poetry
Critisism is GRowth!
I look at it ALL in a Positive light~
I love your honesty!
Forthrightness and Openeness Grady~
WEll said!
WEll felt!
Don't change a thing!
WRite on, on and on!
Warmest Blessings!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Your a poet Grady
a good one too
criticisim come with it
I enjoy both sides
Don't let it get to you
Peace
William
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2006
Okay, I finally stopped my laughing, and I think I can write now. Your poem was absolutely hylarious; and as for me, if I get a bad review I simply wipe it away.Who needs the crap, just push the botton. God Bless, Holly
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2006
It's a mixture of folk in any walk of life, but a sledginging, just hit remove, and off into the either it goooooooossssssss...
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Welcome!
The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
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I look at it ALL in a Positive light~
I love your honesty!
Forthrightness and Openeness Grady~
WEll said!
WEll felt!
Don't change a thing!
WRite on, on and on!
Warmest Blessings!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
love tinka
a good one too
criticisim come with it
I enjoy both sides
Don't let it get to you
Peace
William
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