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Told What to Do
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Almost everyone wants to talk, no one wants to listen. I'm a listener and talker. I try to keep a balance. And if I'm wrong, I surely don't mind taking good advice.


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Some humanoids hate
to be told what too do,
Try to tell them,
a fight might just ensue.
A poet can't even write a poem
which sounds like advice,
some readers will try
to put him on ice.


Some people say,

"What makes you think you're so right,
then try to start a 15 round fight."


What makes this so bad,
they might be the ones wrong.
In my family on both sides,
this is the attitude that confides.
Many of the young ones don't want
to listen to the adults,
many times I had to put up with
disrespectful insults.


My mother was one of the worse,
she had a hard head curse.


I'd say,

"mom make him get out and work
and quit laying around."


She couldn't afford her habit
and eventually lost her home.
After she lost her home,
all the no goods found jobs,
finally got help with
their drug problems.


Now at age eighty two,
she has no home to go to.
Her house should have been
paid off thirty years ago,
up until she lost it
she owed eighty thousand plus,
I was so angry I wanted to cuss,
and for many years I did fuss.


Finally I gave up and
took care of my own yard,
man was my moms head hard.
I'm not clapping,
the worse finally did happen.
I was a responsible son that tried,
instead of appreciation
I got french fried.


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 Reviews of "Told What to Do"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
Oh I am a hard headed person myself...but I guess you know that by now....lol!!

But I guess your mom struggled more than you know...maybe she hhad the same fate as me...fear filled to just let go!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
Criticism helps us all grow. Some can take it and some can't.
Sounds like you've done alright and met the challenge head on.
Good for you. Your friend on the den.
Merry Christmas!
Michael

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
You are alot like me with this write~ I hate being told what to do...and it can fire me off, in the wrong direction, every time! I am hoping my advice to you in the future is taken just the same, just look at all your fire in these writes! HA!French fried...still laughing!
But I Love it!, especially that extra "O" LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
You have so many words of wisdom to share; so many ways of looking at things, and taking your place on the right side. God Bless, Grady.


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