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Looking at Things
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Things can look good, things can look bad, but it's best to be happy and not sad.


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Viewing things out of my eye sight,
I don't like what I see.
I'd change the world
 if it was left up to me.
Some have too much,
others have no such.
Some of us have it good,
others starve without enough food.


First I'd get rid of terror,
 red mark the rest of human error.
I'd go down to Mexico
and get it in order,
so all its people wouldn't be trying
to slip across our border.
I give Africa a dishonorable mention,
I'd certainly give it special attention.


This whole world is out of order,
no wonder the Martians stay
behind their border.
This is my place of birth,
but
sometimes I'd like to escape earth.
Since I can't get out,
the good is what I'm about.


I watch all the good,
it enhances a joyous mood.
I like to hang with the loving,
it helps counter act the devil's shoving.
Out of all that's bad,
it's best to be happy
and
not sad.


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 Reviews of "Looking at Things"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
Happy your on the good side.
Happy Holidays!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
Enjoyed,Thank you

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
"Looking at Things" calls out comparing disorder among us...to wrap yourself in the good to overcome the effects of the bad...It's like I say...most of our problems are because we ALLOW them to be...think about it...but like Sherry says below...One at a time...

great Write One~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed on December 17, 2006
okay. you made your point..but come to think of it...if there are't bad things in this world, would you say it's kina boring?

good poem though.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
We can pick and chose all we wont,but we've got to play the hand we are dealt. Good job.

Michael

Reviewed on December 17, 2006
"It's best to be happy, and not sad." - sound advice, Grady!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
You touch on the many plagues of our times.

Chrissy

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
You are so right, there is a lot that is wrong, but we still must count our blessings and help those who are less fortunate than ourselves. We may not be able to change the world, but we can change people one at a time. Nice work.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
We should all be doing good not bad, but then there is free will. Which is why in the end there is a reward for doing the right thing. Victor


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