Snack Baby (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Cute poem, but then that's you! Cute! Love ya always, Holly

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Enjoyable read and entertainly expressed the desire to chow down. R

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

HAHAH Sorry Charlie I loved the humor "ONE" :)

Reviewed by Verne Washington (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Listen I'm sorry if I offended you. In no way did I mean to say that you should change your writing style. I didn't like your poem and I was just trying to give some sort of constructive criticism. I was just speaking my honest opinion and I believe you should be prepared to hear bad comments about your stuff. Not everyone has the same taste and that's fine. I understand if you don't like my stuff, but if you were to tell me I would like to know why. I might listen, I might not. You don't have to listen to me either.
So continue what you're doing...
I see nothing wrong with it.
And this poem actually did make me chuckle...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Awwww, nice onepoet..

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

A delightful (and delicious) poem, my friend! I needed a good laugh, thank you! Well done!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Great write,just had me a tuna sandwich!
Probably have another tonight.Pizza tomorrow.
Loved it,
Michael

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Oh my ,you are good sweet man..You made me hungry time for a snack.....Hugsssssssssssssss

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

I love it, I hadn't thought about old Charlie the tuna in quite sometime, I grew up with his commercials...I am the first to admit that I too can be a real mean eating machine...especially on these snow days and not being at school....food just seems to call my name...maybe we should be like an old Flintstone episode I recalled as I read your poem, the episode was the one where Fred was on a diet and he had a partner whom he would call if he started to break his diet...we may have to become buddies we could call it the oinkers anonymous! Loved this write one that I am sure many can relate too!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Poor Charlie everyone wants him :-) Just talking to a co-worker the other day about the cost of feeding dogs these days.....four legs, lots of meat :-) Time for a snack...........just kidding I love dogs and could never eat one.

But I could chow down on some pork..........