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These Shoes
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes our dues seem to never get paid up in full...


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We all pay the dues,
to walk in our shoes.
I've paid my dues,
but it still seems like I
can't afford my blues. 
My feet have gotten bigger,
so now I have to refigure.
Sometimes life marks us never paid,
but I've graduated from koolaid.


However the big frosted mug,
keeps trying to give me a hug.
A hug with a smile,
but I'm a grown azz man not a child.
I also gave up tootsie roll lolliepops,
except on Halloween
the licking hardly stops.


My teeth can't afford the price,
seems like now I'm paying twice.
My feet went from a size eleven
to a size fourteen bigger,
my run is slower and I need my trigger.
Give up your money old man,
but I have another plan.


The plan might land me in the slammer,
so I have to ease up on my hammer.
I'd rather be judged by twelve,
than carried by six,
sometimes young and old just don't mix.
This puts me in a fix.
I've learned how to work
and pay for my shoes,
but sometimes I feel like
I'll end up in the evening news.
Either the one still standing tall,
or the one that took a fall.
Either way,
I still might have to pay.
I have a blank check waiting,
hoping I can win the negotiating.


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 Reviews of "These Shoes"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2007
This was a fun romp. I enjoyed the ingenuity of using the shoes as symbols. Good work.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Enjoyed this much my friend, a write that we can all relate too! Your real life writes are always full of wisdom and just the plain old truth! Well written!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
That shoes was made for walking, and one of this days...remember that one? But today we nearly can't afford a pair and sure we can't keep with Imelda Marcos collection.
Don't go tap-dancing my friend, not for a ten bucks a tap.
Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Ever tempted to hit a "bodaga"
For a twinky or two.....Lol
Enjoyed your write Grady
Yeah my feet are getting bigger too
Swelling from water retention
Peace Be With You

William

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
YEPPERS "ONE" things get costier but we keep surviving this was good... I always love your real life poetry you tell it like it is BIG GUY... {{{HUGS}}}

Love,
Lady

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
There's a lot of truth in this poem, One. So many times when we pay off one debt, another follows, and another, etc. But, life is a race and in the end, with faith, we'll all be winners. Keep on plugging along!

Creative and fun writing, filled with words of wisdom. The full package.

Jill

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
This leave much to the imagination. I like the line "I'd rather be judged by 12 then carried by six". Lady J


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