VERY GOOD, Gem. You've taken to the Janaku as thirst does to water!! And not as easy as some may think, to tell an interesting story in continued, short stanzas.
Blessings ~~ Micke
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
You are an outstanding poet here at the Den
Was, Are and Always will be
Peace Brother
William
Blessings ~~ Micke
be a lot more love to go around. A big IF?