This review was left on my poem, "Mere Mortal," "There's a part of me that says spiritual messages don't need to translated, negotiated nor processed. I believe that a spiritual message is somehwhat like receiving the perfect birthday or Christmas present. You know the giver meant it just for you, with all their love." This person has a right to their point of view, however the facts and truth speak for themselves.
Even the holy Bible
had to be translated
in more ways than one
and they're still not done
They recently found another book
burried that translated the
betrayal of Jesus by Judas
It was noted in this book
that Jesus asked Judas
to betray him
This is my opinion only
it made sense to me that
Jesus wanted to be caught
He had a point to make
to the world
The only way to do this
was get crucified
then return as a God
more dignified
Similar passage from
the holy Bible
which holds us liable
If your eyes cause you
to sin then pluck them out
Who the hell is going to
pluck out their eyes
Anyone who wants my
eyes including God
will have to come after
the peepers
because for me they
are keepers
For as long as I
can keep them
Sin or no sin
We suppose to pluck
away the sin
If we can
but we're born into sin man
The holy Bible is full of
holy passage
It's all meant to inspire
and be message
I don't think the Holy man
intended for us to be fools
The bible is just one
of our survival tools
Then there are other
worldly educational schools.
And spiritual message
that will aid in our passage
OnepoetGem
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Reviews of "Translation of Message"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Absolute 10-4 on that one, Grady!
Translations. Hmmm ... I like to put my faith in Jesus - not in some translation written by men. If we can do as Jesus did, and speak as Jesus spoke, we will know His/Our Father ... without allowing the flawed translations to distract us into some other briar patch. We each have our own way to approach spirituality (God) and mine is simplistic and it works for me. :-)
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Translations. Hmmm ... I like to put my faith in Jesus - not in some translation written by men. If we can do as Jesus did, and speak as Jesus spoke, we will know His/Our Father ... without allowing the flawed translations to distract us into some other briar patch. We each have our own way to approach spirituality (God) and mine is simplistic and it works for me. :-)
Ted
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In Christs Love
Michelle~