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Black Friday
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During black friday one person got trampled to death at Walmart, he was a store employee. Another pregnant young lady got trampled but survived.


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The vampire had to
shop at night
before sun up
get his first bite
Black friday was
going to be just right
Out of his castle
window he took flight

Blood sucker was
his main objective
First he figured he'd
bit the store detective
But anyone could be
his victim selective

Dracula was at the
beginning of the line
He had to shop fast
get in befrore sunshine
He forgot about
line two to pay
He won't make it in
before the break of day.

opg

 


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 Reviews of "Black Friday"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
What this world has degenerated to
I bow my head in shame
May the Good Lord in all his glories have mercy
On his soul and bless his family comforting their
Moment of mourning
Peace be with you Brother Grady

William

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
A well written poem.When I first heard that story,it really showed me what type of society and world we live in.It just so sad and disgusting that people don't have any consideration for human life.Plus the people that did this will not confess up to it.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
well written expression of such a trgic thing-all for the sake of greed

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Walmart Clerk Trampled To Death (Friday)As Doors Open,i.e.How Has Humanity Put Its Livelyhood On Buying (MEDIOCRITY) Material Things...

In Mexifornia Its: Brown Friday...

TRASK

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
OnePoet,
I too, read the story..so sad and tragic. What's the world coming too?

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Sad what people will do for money, or greed. Senseless; that's what it is: utter senselessness! We need to get back to the REAL Reason for the Season: the birth of our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
OPG,

Wonderful. I too, read that tragic story. It's a shame that what should be a beautiful time of year breeds so much greed. The vampire saga tells it so well.


Mary

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
I wrote about this horrible event called Black Friday: should be called "Black and BLUE" Friday, because it is: didn't get any money until late Thursday evening, needed food, twin sis and I went to Wal Mart to get food. There was a fistfight over sheets. SHEETS!! Craziness! Fast as I was putting food into my cart, people were taking it out: guess I don't need any. :( Shame, what greed has gotten us: an apathetic, don't give a rip crowd who will stomp people (or, in the case of two grown men, shot) to death, walk all over them, and then complain when they decide to shut the store down?!? GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR DON'T get me started. :( Tragic, all I can say, my condolences go out to the Wal Mart worker's family. They don't pay people enough to take such abuse or to die for the job ...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
...dark poetry...well written...and to the point.
well done OnepoetGem...
John


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