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Whying Time
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I wonder if Adam made excuses
he was a rookie at this worlds abuses
Eve was no match for the devil
neither she nor Adam knew much
about evil
I don't think the creator had even
wrote a bible
yet Adam and Eve were held liable

Man repeats past mistakes again
and continues to live in sin
Adam and Eve only had one apple
tree of knowledge
in this modern world today there are
enough apple trees to feed every college

We eat the same apple
then we juice it up in drinks like snapple
They say the apple is suppose to be
nutritious to eat
same fruit that caused Adam's defeat
Nieve Eve considered it a treat

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 Reviews of "Whying Time"
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
Ah, what thoughts you encourage in our minds, Grady! Well done...and fun!!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
lol, fun and thought provoking

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Substance for thought, OnepoetGem. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Enjoyed sweet sweet man very much..very well done indeed..stay safe and well...keep smiling OK..Hugss
Love Alaways,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
well done--a fun write!

Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Great write, Gem; well done! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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