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Breaks R4 Kids
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Once we lose our virginity break time is over.


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Life presents constant pressures
and very little pleasures
Quite a few carry the weight of
the world on their shoulders
then some create their own boulders
So their load is doubled
at times tripple troubled

Adam added to his burden by
defying Gods rules
his sin opened up the door for
the devils drools
Afterwards Adam had to dig the
earth for survival with his own tools
Modern man desired better education
through higher learning schools

No matter what we do the devil
still drools
Adding unnecessary burden is
the sign of fools
but it seems at times we're all
in the foolish category
We take ourselves all the way
back to mans first story
and many of us will mess up
then never say we're sorry

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 Reviews of "Breaks R4 Kids"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
My screw ups are my own. The devil has nothing to do with them. As always, I enjoyed your poem.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
Well said here. Learning that when we are wrong to admit it is truly a skill many do not do well. LadyJ

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
So true, and you tell it with your gift
for rhyme,done so fine!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
but it seems at times we're all
in the foolish category

It surely seems that way to me.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
interesting write-i think, my friend, that you carry too much of the weight of the world-you should let some of that go! peace to you!


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