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Open Wound
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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This world will never heal, especially with so much sin to appeal, many like to steal. Some even kill just for the thrill.


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To the creator
I bow and neal
but it seems this world
will never heal
No matter how much
we pray and appeal
The devil will
always try to steal
We wish he would chill
but he thrives on our ill
even if we pop a pill
The only plus is
we were made to heal

Day after day
I'm less confused
I know sooner or later
we will be abused
Like a bar of soap
worn and used
We'll be lucky if
we're ever amused

But I look to the light
of the pleasing rain
I face the rising sun
and keep myself sane
Even when I'm in pain
It may seem in vain
but I grab my umbrella
for the teasing rain
knowing that each and
everyday I have to abstain
and that there's very little
to gain

We have no choice
but to remain

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 Reviews of "Open Wound"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 8, 2009
There is always something to gain... even if we have no choice to remain.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
We have no choice
but to remain

The other choice isn't so good. There is very much to gain simply by living if you give it a chance. Patrick

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
YOU ARE RIGHT...WE HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO REMAIN...AND GOD GOES WITH US EVERY STEP OF THE WAY. GOOD WRITE AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
Life is for sure full of thorns and nastiness, and as we evolve one would thing things would begin to get better. But no. Our entrainment industry plays to the baser of our instincts and cheapens life in the process, movies, television, music, are all at fault for the hoodwinking of the public.

Reviewed on September 7, 2009
The world can indeed be a cold place, well captured in your poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
But I look to the light,
of the pleasing rain;
I face the rising sun,
and keep myself sane.

Something I find myself doing quite a lot, these days.


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