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Every Man
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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It seems first man, should have made a better plan, or did he have one, maybe he didin't need none? Who Knows?


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Every man got to
find his own way
no matter what
others do or say
He'll either collect or
have to pay
end up dying or
living his own day

Every plan
includes a man
but every man
doesn't have a plan
A man without a goal
is like a shoe without a sole

Adam first man
maybe should have
made a better plan
God planned a Garden of ease
but the devil planned to tease
His goal was to knock Adam
down to his knees
It seems everyone had a plan
except first man

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 Reviews of "Every Man"
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 28, 2009
Very cool poetic reflection! ...with a good rhyming plan--An almost reggae beat! Such great music and message-a hit I'd say!
Enjoyed muchly, michael

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 28, 2009
having a plan-very important indeed!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2009
Don't know why you aren't on my tracking list, I would have sworn I put you there when I came back. Oh well, you are there now.

Hah! God might should have did a bit of thinking on the subject of the first man in my opinion. Here were two fully grown people He created in the Garden without having the benefit of growing up and learning how to take orders, and what the consequences would be. It is not even a surprise that they followed their instinct and ate the apple/pear/whatever. Actually there are a couple of more instances where He could have done better with the human race. A better immune system, instead of the crappy one we have, would have been one. Okay, I'm outta here, don't really want Him pissed at me so early in the day!


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