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Jumping the Gun
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Taking it slow, might be a good way to go. Taking time to think, especially if we've had a drink, or our minds is on the brink.


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God might have jumped the gun
on Adam's first stance
Maybe he should have gave
first man another chance
After all Adam was new at romance
after giving Eve first glance
He might have been in a
lovers trance

The devil jumped the gun
right on time
He didn't give poor Adam
a chance to figure his crime
He couldn't wait to entice evil
to sublime
Poor little Eve certainly got
too excited
The devil knew he had the
right victims invited

Many of us take off too quick
later on find out we're victims
of a planned trick
One planned by us
or by some other cuss
who might want to fight or fuss
At times we don't know who to trust
but taking it slower might be a must
even for the love that we lust

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 Reviews of "Jumping the Gun"
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
Some very good advice Grady, well penned.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
Rushing in to anything might be exciting, but the consequences! Unless it isn't love anyway. Wise thoughts, dear GEM!

Gina


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