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Best Win Ever
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Is over self, not God, the devil or old saint Nicks elf.


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Winning can be like a paradise afar
a million mile away star
For example like Mars
We all dream of the stars
either that or money big houses
and cars

Winning against self can be a trip
until we run into the man with the whip
or a gun hanging on his hip
Then disaster puts our lives on blip
Even then
it can still be on with the sin
Many are afraid to look in the mirror
they walk around with a phony superior
when really their attitude is inferior

To them they're not acting strange
and they refuse to change
Everyone else is wrong
so they continue this song
even when they're reminded that
they don't belong

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 Reviews of "Best Win Ever"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 14, 2010
this causes one to ponder things, i like that

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 14, 2010
The man with the whip lives behind us all.

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2010
You're a smart man Grady...
Love Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 14, 2010
Your philosophy gives me pause for thought, Grady. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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