Come with me.. Close your eyes.. Listen to the musical ring.. Angels hear me sing Watch as I fly On doves wings.. Above the clouds Above the rain Above this earth Above this pain.. Bird of white love.. Bring me home.. Make me whole.. Help me find chidish soul.... Hidden by this young girl so long ago.... Clearly I need to feel the sun Need to know I am not the only one.... Clearly I need to see.. The radiance of me.. Let my essence grow.. With each sway of your soft white wings.. I am trying to understand I am so confused.. But willing to let you help me see my way through. The Spirit of this great white bird.. Are you here To give a message.. Please.. Don't leave me here alone.. I need to feel your wings.. Soft against my skin.. I NEED to know You love me.. I listen for your answer Every night in the wind.. But I only hear my own voice singing.. Perhaps it is I.. Who locks you out within.. Great white bird I am waiting for a sign That one day peace will be mine.. White bird of love.. I wish to fly with you once again To feel your velvet wings.. To hope that heaven hears The songs of hope I sing Lost are the songs Traveling on the wind. Looking for an end.. But praying To begin. To live in this life.. To feel hope To feel life To feel love .......once again.
This is very beautiful soaring poetry, Erica!!!… Outstanding creation and very emotive!!!… I enjoyed this piece very much!!!… Thank you for sharing your gifted quill!!!… Bravo Poet!!!
Symbolic and uplifting verses, Erica. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
I agree with Ian that you got the symbolic significance of the dove pegged. I also liked the way you formatted this, it makes it easy to read and brings out the words more.
You have truly understood the symbolic significance of the dove here and while on first reading I did not think you had made the line stucture work for you, second time around I saw how you had captured the rhythm of flight. Brilliant.
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