Demons Take Me Home.... (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

wow!!!

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Let there be light, but we seem to love to switch it off. Great poem.

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I love this write Erica. I think you know that the darkness is only a shadow of light produced to give us rest among other things,and the light itself comes in the form of many shades, but overall it always overcomes all other shades, incuding the dark, it's just a matter of knowing which phase you are in and staying strong until the light prevails,which it always will.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

i think everone else sqaid it all best so yes we have demons and there are days when it seem that is all there is is those demons but we have friends to help us

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Erica, a wonderful tale you have written. Suspensful and as real as one can make it. But the demons you have faced are not from hell, they surrounded you in life and made it miserable. Demons are everywhere. There are at AD also. They pretend goodness with their slick oily tongues; when all the want to to is pervert lives and gain control of others to have them live under their direction. If you do not deliver what they want, then prepare for their attacks. But as Kate said, light does always overcome darkness. Choose well now that you are adult when you choose your friends. Your whole future depends on it. You wrote a stimulating article; even much more stimutating than you thought. Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Ditto. Can't improve or add to what has already been expressed. Well done.
~E

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Darkness has to end and light must come upon us to shine. so Bravo, Erica!!!

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Those damn demons... wonder write>

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Wonderful poem on the hopeless feeling one can have at times.........but.......light always overcomes darkness. Hugs.

Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Good work! Erica, our demons are are born of pain, but the light of love destroys them all.
Thank's for your review. - D.L.

Reviewed by Dr S J.Davies

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Your style has reached a new high ,
If poetry was Pop music You would be Jennie from the Block

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Erica ....all it takes is a little ray of light in that darkness...just a bit of it can overcome the dark....BUT....a bit of darkness can enver overcome the Light...thats just how it is...I know these feelings..floria

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

look how you did that EDEN thingy. cool. demons bug
josie

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Well written, Ericka.
You were meant to be born, hon. Keep your faith, life can still be good for you.

ty
tony:)

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

This is a very multi-layered piece, one that I feel should be read several times to fully grasp the nuances. Excellent! Mal.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

another great write from you.