SHE WAS INSANE (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Soul touching , gut writing. I will never understand violence, but I am aware of it.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

haunting!

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

an overwhelming poem. It stopped me in my tracks.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

wow something that seems to happen more and more everyday scary too....powerful and painful

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Oh my dear Erica, how she suffered. How terrible an ordeal for one so young. To have to grow up and live with these memories all your life is so hard to do. The only weay we exorcise our demons is to let them out ... and you are doing this.
Each time we do this we lessen their hold on us. You are so talented. Use this talent to gain complete victory over them. One of these days they will be gone and your heart will be free. Bill

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Erica, you excel at bringing the reader along for the ride. We see what you see, hear what you hear...no matter how much it hurts.

Always love your work. And still gonna keep sending you those positive vibes!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Well penned, what a write, rips at the heart.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Very impressive write....thank u.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Oh my god, Erica...this is so eloquently quintessential, it rips into my mind and heart. It tells a million children's story, it is insanely sane, it is a nightmare to caring people, it will haunt me...

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Erica, I don't know what to say. But this was moving and motivating, overcome, adapt and improvise. GEM

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Dear Erica, very powerful write!Well written poem!:)

love
tony

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Deep !

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Insanity does have it rewards. Very vivid story outlined in these words. Well done

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Yep, she's insane....

Sandie Angel :o( a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Being a Social Worker dealing with abused children this tells the real story all too often hid. Excellent! Thank You Sage

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

So powerful and intense, I doubt they ever realized, it was they who were insane all along, this got to me like no other poem ever could,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

OMG what a heartpounding, gut wrenching write! WOW you expressed yourself well in this emotional, hard hitting write...and the pic is chilling...well done, erica! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( *tears*

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

This is so gut-wrenching for anyone who had to go through this! the power of yur writing is incredible! Well done Erica!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

an important poem..TY