Krissy In Control (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

This is powerfully so true .
Drugs will demand your time , family, friends money and finally your life .
This poem needs to be read aloud to those who may want to experience drugs .

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Powerfully touching write!!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Emotions screaming.

Nancy

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

an excellent write of the unfortunate situatuion, many of our close ones have experienced...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

An awesome write Erica, on a traumatic subject!

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

erica, this one is a winner! captured all feelings! fantastic!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Wow Erica this is a definitely chilling and poignant write that speaks in tones! A True Masterpiece to me!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Dear Erica, Chilling write, and excellent!

Love YF
tony

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

So very sad.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Powerfully touching write...

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Sad but effective work.

Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Oh wow... this is awesome...
It's as though these emotional words could be the essence of pain perfectly sculpted and chiseled in ice...

Wonderful... :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Oh Erica this was so painful to read and so well penned.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Sad, you do these so well, Erica.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

sad indeed, good write

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

This is so harrowing Erica...you have seen such a dark side of life. From your eyes as well as the eyes of the people in your life. I think it is your ability to write about it and write so well, that keeps you alive.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

This is harrowing to read, Erica but written so incredibly well. I am very moved by it.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Erica ,
this is so sad sweetie it touches
Hugs
Peg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Erica, your writting is perfect. A very emotional piece to get through. The will to be plays a huge part in everything we do.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Such a strong and powerful poem, I am just overcome by the emotional content of this poem, So outstanding,

Excellent, and beautifully sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Could not find the words to describe how well you write.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Incredible writing.
Better you capture pain than pain capture you. There are too many sad stories in this world. Too many people in a nightmare and we can't wake them up. And when being there for them means being in the nightmare...have to watch so carefully for burn out.
I love the opportunity to help people in my job, but I'm almost too sensitive to do it.
Almost.
John

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Erica, this is sooooo sad. I know well of the feelings of craving for mother's love and wanting to be cradled in mother's arms. This one is soooo real and so expressive, I can relate to the feelings so well. Hope it was just a fiction.

Sandie Angel :o(