Hearts Final Death (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

A dark masterpiece, rips at the heart.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

A very deep and powerful poem my dear Erica. You can really rock with the punches life throws at you. Your poetry is very outstanding. Your friend. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

a lot of frantic activity will always do it to you...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

You can knock the breath out of anyone with your excellent, potent, poetry Erica!I'm so glad you can get this stuff out on paper! Take
care;-)!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

A very close-knit write. I like the flow of this.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

you have great talent!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

this was so powerfully sad, you have captured that feeling so very well, I was touched so deeply by your powerful and poignant poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Erica, very well done. Very sad poem. Gee!!!
missed ya. Don't be a stranger.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Love it, the way it tumbles down the page. Bravo. Well done.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Very very well done, Erica! Powerfully presented!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

I am in awe..I am in awe..excellent..you have a great talent...

Vesna

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

For a moment I thought that I was warehoused as the train of imagination made the last stop at "desperation and indifference station".

"Hearts Final Death" is a very vibrant picture. It is painted with the ink of reality, and written with emotions of an artist that poetizes with words of knowledge that teach and inspire.

"Hearts Final Death" took me for a long trip on the chariot of imagination.

Thanks for sharing "Hearts Final Death".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Hi Erica, First of all your poem is wonderfully written! You captured a girl in a totally abusive time. As a pen pal of yours, I must write how proud of you I am.You can take a punch!!

LYF
Tony:)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Damn it girl, were you been?