Why God (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

Is it not life to live hell on earth..It is how we fare after our pain..Which defines us..Thank you for beautifull words..michael

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

{{{Erica}}}
This is such a powerful heartwrenching write! You go in your poetry so deep within that all we can do sometimes is just be totally awestruck and amazed!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

THis is deep write...lovely!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Very heart-wrenching...Must be how God felt when He let His Son die...There is an evil one that rules this earth, during this phase of our life, he is the one responsible, not God. I hope you can find comfort in knowing that perfection is yet to come. An excellent write Erica!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

(((erica)))

haunting and heartwrending write...well done

done with class and grace

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

why, indeed...*tears*

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

I agree with Andre .."poetry SHOULD be the face of reality even when it is a dream"...
I see you see the world as it is...somehow I'd like to believe that the tree that falls makes much noise but the forest quietly expands and grows..let us have faith that the Creator knows WHY....

Excellent write..you are an Angel in action...Bravo!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

heartwrenching piece; well done! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

I weep for these children. And yes too many of them are forgotten, too many of them have not anyone to hear their painful cries. A heartbreaking write, but written well by it's author. ~SH~

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Never rest Your pen; don't let Your quills dry.

"Why God" is flowing through the river of imagination showing the foam of injustice on its way to the lake of reality.

"Why God" is what poetry is to be... The face of reality even when it is a dream... and the picture of a dream showing the facts of life.

I Salute the Author of "Why God" with the accolades of my heart.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Your writing always tears at my heart and this is no exception. A haunting, sad piece
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Erica, very powerful write and also very heartfelt. We must pass the blame to human weakness and ignorance. Very well written.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Very powerful and vivid, Excellent message for all to read,

Reindeer

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

I surely agree with Ted, extremely vivid and sad piece.
Jim