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Breaking
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
  
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written as a teen.. remix/repost


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Yes
You were the Master.
I was your horse.
It was your job to tame me.
No matter what the cost.
You stood with your saddle..
tightly in hand.
You tried to place it on my back ... but I ran.
I knew you wanted to break me.
Wanted me to follow in your tracks.
But there was NO way
you were ever going to get that
sattle on my unbroken back.
I know you have broken many..
I have seen their tattered lives.
I have seen your smile
like a trophy you won
filled with pride.
But you didn't break me..
Not that you didn't try.
I was determined to stay strong ... 
that is how I survived.
Mother and Daughter..
A war we had..
from the day I was born. 
now the war is over ..
Memories are all torn..
The fighting is done now..
I think we both have lost
Now I ask this question
What did this victory cost?

ERICA



 


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 Reviews of "Breaking"
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Just as gripping and powerful as the first read, Erica!! God, your spirit is so strong, you amaze me... :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
The metaphor is outstanding Erica!Another heartwrenching powerful write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Very well written as always Erica!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
a very good poem Erica, depicts alot of home life, very well written, great message, al

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Well written this poem is.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Love the painting and its perfection to go with this poem. Very powerful write and great question at the end.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Erica, very well written. Sometimes we win the battle but lose the war.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Well written piece..


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