I must have had few drinks when I wrote this one..
To fake a kiss.. You cannot do.... I can sense your emotion .. In the smooth way your lips touch mine.. Can read you as your kisses turn to urgency desire.. physical need.. Our mouths together.. Moving in unison.. You breath for me.. I breath for you.. I can tell when it is love scented.. When our breath intertwine.. Both of us giving something.. of ourselves.. We both want this kiss.. Of life.. Of Love to forever bind I can feel true emotion.. I can feel if it is only sexual need.. I can feel a kiss so deep as if we were searching for something.. Lost Now suddenly replaced.. A kiss that will bring tears to the eyes of your very soul.... This is a true kiss.. Something you can't fake.. Something you can't hide.... Yes, I can tell a true kiss.. One meant for me.. Don't be ashamed.. Just let this moment ride.. I can handle anything.. No need to lie.. Just remember You can't fake a kiss.. Not with me.. I can tell... every single time.
No, Cynthia, I don't believe Erica was under the influence of the worm, she didn't say anything about kicking some &$#.^(*^%'s butt. I really did like this particular poem. Write on.
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
Erica,
Nice write, I don't think anyone should try to fake a kiss.
I know I couldn't do it.
Glenna
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
You have a really good talent in picking interesting subjects Erica, this is a great subject and I'm sure many would love, any age actually, I know I loved it, Super job as always Er, Al
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TRASK
Nice write, I don't think anyone should try to fake a kiss.
I know I couldn't do it.
Glenna
Cynthia