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Something Died
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Written as a teen.. ECA 1982-1983 remix/repost

She is all covered in blood.. Under her bed hidden She hid herself.. She ran from HIM. Mind closed Eyes wide Time to die.. Must hide Must hide No cover.. Evil finds her .. No help.. Only fright Something stolen on this night The gateway to her soul filled with fear.. Broken childhood despair Just a lost soul.. Who is to weep? For innocence taken.. Love forsaken She wants to live.. Yet hope... ....wants to die.. Dreams disappear.. within her clouded eyes. Clouded eyes that reflect tragedy and pain knowing there is no help.. In her world.. so insane She tries desperatly to remember her name.... She feels cold.. Emptiness in this storm of life.. No hope.. No sight.... Must fight.. This deep dark hole.. Iron grip has it's hold... Doesn't want to let her go.. So Cold So Alone So hard to feel alive.. Within the darkness of her clouded eyes The innocence of childhood finally died. .. ~ERICA

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Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

C'est magnifique, Erica! Absolute a cracker!

Justin

Reviewed by Robin Spicer

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Erica, This is so explosive that i could feel the emotions within.
A truly great piece.
Thank you
Robin

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Tough poem.

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

You As I TRASK Are Here For SPECIFIC REASON,i.e. No Matter YourPlight, Your Sons, Yourself Above All Else Carry On Which That You Do Write, Try Not To Look Back Only Those Good Memories, They Will Help Heal Strenghten your Soul, Relax Your Mind_

Believe It Or Not(Pain) We All Get To Meet Our Accusers In The Eye's Of (God)!There Is Redemption In Your Own Hands You Heal Your Plight,i.e. Even If It Mean's Wielding Saint Michaels Arc Angels Sword In Your Hand!!

Thank You Your Beautiful Comments!

Tear's, TRASK

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

You elicit the emotions that you sought. Well expressed. I think you mean "iron grip has its hold" rather than "it's" hold. Thank you for sharing this. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

This was so powerful and gripping, This really got to me Erica, outstanding expression,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

great poem here Erica, reachs in deep, al

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

You can write these pieces of life in hell better than anyone I know.
I'm so thankful for your strength, Erica,you glow!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Erica you did a wonderful job conveying feelings here...I felt cold..I felt alone...just reading this sad poem...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Deep and slices like swords through the heart. There is nothing worst then a child loosing their innocence. Great write!

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