Mysterious Fervere Veil of Willow (poem) by Mary Ann Biddinger on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2012

Very mysterious and deeply sensual.
Could feel the whirlpool of enchantment and desire

Peter

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

Just breathtaking Mary Ann!
I am soothed by the sonic elements which you do so well.
Blessings, xx
Christine

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 28, 2012

TAKE GREAT CARE AS TO THE 'ENTITY' WE FOLLOW...WHAT APPEARS TO BE BEWITCHINGLY LOVELY JUST MAY BE YOUR DOOM! A WONDERFUL WORK FILLED WITH THE MYSTERIOUSNESS OF THE...WILLOWS. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 25, 2012

Your verses make me want to meet her, Mary Ann. Well done! Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on February 25, 2012

The elusive picture of a woman veiled in nature matches your words of enchantment! This reader wants to linger in the forest to see what will appear to me as if in a dream. Beautifully done, Mary Ann.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 25, 2012

enchanting, lovely poem ...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on February 25, 2012

A change of pace for you here, Lady Mary Ann. I sense a dream theatre melody singing in this as I read. But you heighten the ambit of the write by injecting hints of classicism into the images as they flow effortlessly together. Lovely work! Peace to you ... richard

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

"Ever to breathe" love of
uniqueness in your poem!!!
*Lady Mary Ann*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

ebony of illustrious shadow and many other mysterious phrases to linger upon. enjoyed. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Completely enchanting!!!! You have created a beautiful story that captures the essence of the picture to perfection! Lovely phrasing, Mary Ann!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Wow, this is enchanting poetry and such a beautiful photo this write is excellent indeed Laura

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Quite mysterious, and quite lovely.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on February 22, 2012

You had me going along with the "Mysterious fervere veil of willow," and I was getting a warm glow until suddenly, there was this word . . . "wrath." Huh? Maybe I missed something, dear, Mary Ann, but wrath stood out like a . . . er . . . wrath.

Loved the poem, even with wrath as a curiosity.