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She Cried
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
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Once upon a half past night-noon
in a field without daisies
sat a girl who’d left her room
telling the moon

‘It takes no brains
to make daisy chains’

crazy
crazy
crazy
crazy
crazy
Maisey
wanted
to
play
in
a
field
full
of
daises
she
sat
and
sat
and
sat
and
sat
she
cried
and
cried
and
cried
and
cried
and
cried
as
no
daisy
was
in
bloom
beneath
the
cold
winter
moon

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 Reviews of "She Cried"
Reviewed by Chels Duncan
Reviewed on March 28, 2011
Absolutely love it xx

Reviewed by lili dauphin
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
Very nice and charming.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Poor Maisey - still at it!! Can you tell her to stop, please, as Purbeck's about to go under... No brains to make daisy chains? But how many moons does it take to make Maisey brains?! A fair few, I reckon... and even more to make Andy brains! Any Northern Lights in your neck of the woods this evening?! xx

Reviewed on February 16, 2011
I really love your children's poetry Andy.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 15, 2011
Very creative work.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2011
Oh my lovely indeed...Hugsss

Reviewed on February 14, 2011
"She Cried" is a wonderful trail of poetic petals Andy

Moon Beams
Vickie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 13, 2011
Very lighthearted and filled with a wee bit of whimsey...M

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 13, 2011
I've not seen a poem like this, I think. Playful:)
Sheila

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 13, 2011
enjoyed the read

Reviewed on February 12, 2011
Have you ever tried to make a daisy train? Well, I can tell you it's easier to do he love's me , he love's me not........Maisey couldn't be any less or any more crazy via the moon or a daisy....cute write :) Morgan

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on February 11, 2011
Light hearted, quirky and fun on the top level...but I sense deeper more disturbing layers to this piece...
Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 11, 2011
Sorry I can't help her out. My daisies are now buried under two feet of snow. I doubt even my dogs could dig them out right now.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
Innocent and very charming on one level
and on another a deeper, more haunting thought.
Fine writing, Andy.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
You are a genius at this adorable kid stuff!
lovely to read ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
Very nicely written, Andy.


Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
Seems everybody is getting snow, everywhere, except for poor Regis below...oh well Maisey will get her daisies soon enough...e

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
enchanting,poem, Andy!Good to see you here!;-)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
Creative and nicely done, Andy.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
This reminds me of a nursery rhyme and to me, your words can be open to different interpretations. I also like the graphic image and its message; we could do with some snow here since we've had no winter to speak of so far. Thank you, Andy. Love and peace,

Regis


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