Love in a Box (poem) by Andy James Turner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 11, 2012

absolutely a joy to read

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2012

This is quite a telling tale. I like what Janna Hill said: "build it & she will come" because your closing line, "And designed for me", is exactly the formula that sums up your literary sketch here of the locked black box becoming musical. For me this is way more beautiful than cute; it says a great deal to me. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Shirley Houston

Reviewed on May 13, 2012

Only "she" will ever open the box so well guarded! Love this one; and totally relating!

Reviewed by Layla Thomas

Reviewed on January 22, 2012

yes, like a musical box I can imagine it well. "it's a small world after all" is the tune the one I wound up this afternoon. I sometimes imagine though that i am the little plastic ballerina resting up on top of a small spring, so easily removed by innocent little hands...lovely. spirited write here Andy.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 10, 2011

Sweet write, Andy... ...it took me a long while but I think I've found the one. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

A sweet poem, Andy. Enjoyed.
Sheila

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 7, 2011

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

I would say - life is within the box - The outter part of the box will die and return to the earth from which it came but the life in the box will return to the Heaven from which it came. Be a little flower in the Kingdom of God's Garden. Marguerite Little Flower

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 5, 2011

whimsy and a jingle Andy -- it's marvelously entertaining -- you were thinking outside of the box on this one -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 4, 2011

Like Jack in a box...it will pop..just wait you will see~
smiles,
Christine

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on October 4, 2011

Awww. Box of Dreams - build it & she will come..
:) Janna

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 3, 2011

But the music box plays on!
Love's Song, just a new verse
for Your poem to live on!!

Play It ~Andy~

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 3, 2011

Sweet high-spirited rhythm to this little whimsical gem!
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on October 3, 2011

Cute...lively write! How you must have danced when she set you free!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 3, 2011

My love is like
A musical box

Wow, keep on playin music!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 2, 2011

A fine way of putting it, Andy.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on October 2, 2011

A rarity, to find the one with the key. Hold tightly to it. Lovely piece! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on October 2, 2011

This is awesome Andy and well written. Thanks.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on October 2, 2011

A heartfelt poem well done so wonderfully indeed Laura

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 2, 2011

IT ALWAYS AMAZES ME...THOSE WONDERFUL INSTRUMENTS THAT GOD WILL USE TO SET US FREE FROM ONE THING OR ANOTHER. PRAISE BE HIS HOLY NAME! THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY AND ENJOY YOUR LOVED FILLED BOX. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS