AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Leanne Bright Cloudman, iMartin Treon, iTeresa Walker, iMyra Darwish, iRiley Blake, iJudy Joy Jones, iCynth'ya Reed, iElla Rydzewski, iPatricia Hilliard, iPamela Wiedenbeck, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Andy James Turner

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· 112 Titles
· 1,885 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2009

Andy James Turner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



American Dream
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

.


Poem Artwork

In my hand I've a gun
Am I a soldier
Shooting school children
Does it mean guns are fun

Killing people at work
Is it really a joke
Shooting in a mall...
Is this freedom for all

Or should someone rethink
That the amendment stinks
The land of the brave - oh dear
Is a nation built on fear

Because I'm black
Gives you permission to attack
There's something in your brain
That's insane and you lack

American dream
A love affair
Nation under God
Living a mare  

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "American Dream"
Reviewed on October 3, 2013
Not everyone should have a gun, knife, anything deadly and we need to take steps to see that they don't. Well penned Andy.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 26, 2013
all these senseless killings is heart breaking

thats why I have the right to own my Gun

to protect myself from from the evil men do



William

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
Guns don't kill..people do!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
As a nation, we are obsessed with violence and also very fearful of the “unknown.” That makes us cuddle up to a warm gun with thoughts of some kind of protection from all kinds of evils in our own version of the Second Amendment.

It's time we got real and removed violence from our vocabularies and our lives.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
This is not an American Dream; it very sadly seems to be a World Dream these extremely sad days on our planet.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
If I had a big knife.
Believe me, I could take your life.
So let's be true.
Guns don't kill, people do!

Amen!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
Points well made, Andy. Thank you for sharing your point of view. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
Because I'm white
You come gunning for me
The American Dream
You learn hatred at your knee.

Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
I really like the last stanza here but have to give a BIG amen to Anna's comment.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
It's sad to see how things are falling and how cruel these men can go !

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
It's not the guns that terrify me...it's who's carrying them...

Anna

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2013
Strikes a chord...
Amend the amendment...
Thou shalt not kill
Is the first commandment...
Which came first?
Which is worst?
Hard to say
in this age and day...

You've written a memorable and provocative poem here Andy... we need more who think like you...

Roger


New Poetry by Andy James Turner
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

World As Refuge by Chiemi

The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.  
Member BookAds

Reality Repair Rx: Knowing What's Up and What's Not by William Cottringer

This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.  
Member BookAds