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Awakening
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Awakening Callously, you reduced me to tears Making me face unfathomable fears Forcing me then, to carry on Wondering what, became of our bond Thinking all along, that we were perfectly secure It’s then, that you departed, leaving sorrow for me to endure So, you went on living, without a backwards glance Causing me to remain, in a steady somber trance Then, one day I woke up, suddenly feeling new Free of all the melancholy, that was caused by you Relieved to be unburdened, of all that extra weight Now, looking back on everything, I see you weren’t so great! (c) 2010 Copyright by May Torres

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 12, 2010

Although this deals with a hurtful situation, the ending indicates freedom, validation and thus is very encouraging and uplifting. Thank you for sharing, May. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on February 28, 2010

this is great...havent we all had 'awakenings' to the not-so-great people/happenings that at one time we thought were imeasurable treasures?....

is 'imeasureable' a word? or does the spelling just look all caflooey? we ALL know that 'caflooey' is a word don't we? :)

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on February 23, 2010

Yes, I can relate this. Simple and straightforward, yet full of emotion and wisdom. Liked very much.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2010

awww...welll bad experience...but goodanytime you wake up,its never too late....cheers !!! neerja

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 19, 2010

it is such an awesome feeling when we embrace ourself
and the importance of our own path
it takes 2 people to be in any relationship
& only one to end it for any reason they so choose
and in this it is a grand feeling to let go of ole baggage
no matter what the weight may be
I am so glad you are free from the "somber trance" <---Love That!
Peace & Continued Happiness!!
Vickie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 18, 2010

Thank God the nightmare is over and you can look at life with renewed hope. Great poetry that untold thousands have gone through.

George C.

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