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Waltzing in the Moonlight...Sanil's Challenge
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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I've never done this before, so I am sorry it is so long.


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As she stood there
With tears in her eyes
Constantly edging
Her way to the door

Knowing no one
Would take her hand
And stroll with her
Across the dance floor

Steel braces wrapped around her legs
Since she was a child
Always standing sentinel
To her aloneness

But she loved the music
As her thoughts would drift away
Like a cat in a jungle
Visions of her stealth like a lioness

She would devour
The love of a man
If only he would look
At what was inside

So there she stood
In that so, so pretty dress
her head hanging low
Knowing no one would take her for a dance ride

Every now and then
Out of the side of her eyes
A tall skinny boy
Would sneak a look her way

She noticed it most
When the music would thump
And in her enjoyment
Her hips would start to sway

Finally she made it to the door
Escape was so near
But before she bolted
She paused one last time

Hoping for a chance to
Dance with a boy
Sadly none appeared at her side
Knowing she was not of their kind

As she stepped into the street
Looking up at the sky
The moon was so full
And its glow was so bright

The music could still be heard
In her head or for real
And there she started to
Dance alone in the light

When all of a sudden
The tall boy from inside
Startled her as he
Tapped on her shoulder

He asked her a question
She never thought she would hear
“Would you care to dance”
Before it gets any colder

She started to cry
Thinking this cannot be
No one ever asked before
So she put up a fight

But he looked in her eyes
And pulled her in close
Soon they were dancing
Waltzing in the moonlight

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 Reviews of "Waltzing in the Moonlight...Sanil's Challenge"
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
very nice story, i like the way that you tell it. the words flow smoothly.

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
a sweet and soulful write

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Such a tender and beautiful answer to the challenge. You did well, and it was just long enough!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
You did this in grace and elegance special challenge special write.
Peggy

Reviewed by a- maryllis
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Oh wow... I can truly feel this one Sara...some would say that I'm that girl
Very beautiful write

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Beautiful !

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Sara!! you took me right up into the rhythm of this one......God This is real good girl...Hope your dance had a happy ending......sighhhhhhh.....you Okay Man!!
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Lovely writing with a wonderful story within it...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
this is touching and so very beautiful


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