The Stars
are diverse,
yet, they
shine for all.
But human,
the stars
of the Earth;
extinguishes
the lamp
of peace,
and oils
the lamp
of war
with the blood.
Because,
human
are suppressed
by the
clouds
of revulsion,
and often
they fight,
with the
spurious
delusion
and lose
the reality
of their
lustrous
existence.
Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
Very well done Bhuwan. So much in so little to so many
tough truthful piece my good natured friend. It's hard for people like you and I to stomach this cruel world at times. I understand.
I have learned to stomach it and embrace the good. We have no choice. take care G
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
powerful Bhuwan, Al
Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
So true Bhuwan and so powerfully said.
Well done
Andrea
How sad ,hauntingly beautiful write and so true.You are proof that poets are the new world prophets. Much love Bhuwan..May we all meet one day upon the wind. Mikii
Human soul is darker than his hair,
His heart nerveless like the fingernails,
His mind full of sychophancy and jealousy,
His brain reckonless and
His person as selfish as fox.
Because he is suppressed by the cloud
Of revulsion.
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Such a POWERFUL write...
Outstanding dear friend...
Trixie :)
I have learned to stomach it and embrace the good. We have no choice. take care G
Well done
Andrea
Powerful words!
Powerful pen!
I salute you sir.....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Dani x
William
great write..floria
Reindeer
Love Tinka
His heart nerveless like the fingernails,
His mind full of sychophancy and jealousy,
His brain reckonless and
His person as selfish as fox.
Because he is suppressed by the cloud
Of revulsion.
hope we never loose the "lustrious existence".
a gem Poet.
LOVE N LUCK
Lady Peg