No matter how much oil
We put in the lamp
It will not burn
If the hurricane is around
For the lamp to burn
Oil is not everything
More than the oil
The lamp needs
Serene vicinity to burn
And when it finally burns
Its solitary ray would
Terminate the hurricane
And illuminate the whole world.
I look upon this poem as a sacred write to be savored and one, which I’ve enjoyed tremendously. Very calming.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
Oh, my! Bhuwan, my first visit to you has left me gasping, but smiling.. what inner peace you provide, such thoughts you feed. This is truth without the shouting... I love this entirely! I must thank you for writing something that will linger through my day. katy xox.
Bhuwan,
your poetry is a light in the lamp
for others to be lead ....
Wisdom and excellent verses.
poet.
"No matter how much oil
We put in the lamp
It will not burn
If the hurricane is around
For the lamp to burn
Oil is not everything
More than the oil
The lamp needs
Serene vicinity to burn
And when it finally burns
Its solitary ray would
Terminate the hurricane
And illuminate the whole world."
Love Tinka
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
FOR THEY ARE FACTS
WILLIAM
I look upon this poem as a sacred write to be savored and one, which I’ve enjoyed tremendously. Very calming.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Excellent.
Gina
Reindeer
On this fortieth day of Spring I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
your poetry is a light in the lamp
for others to be lead ....
Wisdom and excellent verses.
poet.
"No matter how much oil
We put in the lamp
It will not burn
If the hurricane is around
For the lamp to burn
Oil is not everything
More than the oil
The lamp needs
Serene vicinity to burn
And when it finally burns
Its solitary ray would
Terminate the hurricane
And illuminate the whole world."
Love ~N~ Luck always
Lady peg