Thoughts are free
my lips are as open
as the thoughts;
"O love! Come
and seal my lips
with the zephyr
of your lips
and together let us
explore the infinity
and be as free as the sea
for the lips clustered by love
are more delicious than they seems.
"Lips clustered by love"... think of grapes and the oak-barrelled wines; think of the juice of English strawberries on a hot, sultry summer's day; think of the saltiness that gathers on lips washed by the sea and glossed by the fresh sea-breeze...mmmmm!!! Could be conjoined with those FOREVER! You capture the depths of an eternity in the breath of lover's kiss in this heart-stopping write, Bhuwan. You are rapidly becoming the Prince of Poetic Romance in my book....TY as ever, Kate xx
Wow!!!!!!!! lips being free as the sea.. mmmmm can feel that here as i read it and think about how lips are so powerful when together as one
Love the pic also
Tommy
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
When Sophie Bayles inadvertently ruins a young man’s chance for employment, she sets out to find him a new position. Even though he doesn’t want her to.
~Linda
Sounds like some sort of forbiden fruit...
Nicely written and well done...
love is most beautiful. Thank you Bhuwan!
Excellent write Bhuwan........
Breathless!!! It seems we both love the Eros & Psyche sculpture, for I just used it in one of my poems!!! Such a small world sometimes!!
The utter raw sensuality of a kiss can never be overlooked and this poem reminds us of that! Well done.
~Rose~
Beautiful poetry!
Love, Sheila
Smoooooooooooochy one!!
Love Tinka
Love the pic also
Tommy