I live beyond the confines of the mystery (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 11, 2005

Beautiful poem.

Bill

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2005

brilliant!!!

Vesna:)

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

"I cannot live among you, the price would be too high..." was the germ of an unfinished poem of mine, so this poem resonates in me, Bhuwan. Very fine...

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

Dear Bhuwan,

A very deep and heartfelt write, it brought tears to my eyes. What a wonderful happy world we would be in, if so many more lived by your ways. A most unique poem, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts Bhuwan. Take care and God bless.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on December 21, 2004

Wonderful insirational words Bhuwan...Happy holidays to you and your loved ones, best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 19, 2004

Very nice.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Wow! This is absolutely wonderful. Magnificent.
Merriest Christmas and Blessed Years
Tracey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Inspirationally and eloquently expressed, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing this most meaningful offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on December 14, 2004

well said bhuwan

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

you are an inspired being and so your poetry naturally follows suit ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

How do you do this - AND make it look effortless??? This just takes my breath away, Bhuwan. Dawn (PS: I love that word, "salubrious")

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Your soul shines here, Bhuwan; as it usually does. Write On!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

A transcendental write of the highest kind... it takes a mature and highly developed spirit to be able to acknowledge - with no regret - that "I cannont live the way they live". And yours are no empty and mystical words without meaning, Bhuwan, because you demonstrate fully what it means to walk the walk that you talk! God be with you always. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

such wondrous sentiments. to exist in such a space is to truly transcend environment, time and space.

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

A great write

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Bhuwan, excellent , bravo, the last two lines say it all. So profound. Love and Luck my friend and Master Poet.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Exceptional words to live by, my friend. Incredible write, as only you can do. Thanks for sharing it. May your path always be guided by warmth and happiness.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Outstanding....what a powerful statement

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

This is exactly why you are one of the best authors here. Your expression of thought is amazing and I fully enjoy how you shared it with so few words.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

This is a top-drawer write, Bhuwan. We must each find our path, and you have been blessed with the wisdom to understand that following the paths of the others will not allow you to reach your chosen destiny. This is just fantastic writing!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

"I cannot live the way they live."

You can't imagine how much I relate to these words, and the whole piece, Bhuwan... You've flowed the mind of a Poet into words with wings.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

You have chosen your path, and a beautiful path it is......
an aide to get thru times of reality......
smart guy :)
beautiful poem

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Masterfully done Bhuwan!!

Warm Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Magnificent Bhuwan! This must be published! Love Eileen