The people are rising up. (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2005

This has to be your best- not an unecessary word to be found.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

Powerful truthful write!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

powerful and profound Bhuwan!

peace, Carole

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

This has such an epic resonance to it, Bhuwan, that it is like both a "trumpet blast" and a "warning". It is stark and shocking, but at the same time, gracious and a lament, truly born out of horror and sorrow rather than bitterness and anger. I like the way it would appear to have a prophetic, or "battle-cry" chant to it in it's narrative and construction, although it is profession rather than a militancy that underlines it. You speak with such passion about these torturous issues and yet you do not sound filled with hatred or even a righteous indignation. Only someone of true stature and purity of spirit could accomplish such a feat. That is why your words cut like a knife and are so effective. Because of their lack of vitriol. Stay strong and may justice for your people come soon. Amen and amen. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

There is truth in what you write. Well-done!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

Much truth and wisdom once again Bhuwan! Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

is the scent of social progress in the air?
well said, Bhuwan.
peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

I see this like a poetic Shakespearean tragedy, and the name of the king is Greed.

blessin's Bro. BT,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

very profound poem! humankind has such a long way to go ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

Profound write Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

Bhuwan, this is a powerfully profound composition, my gifted friend. �The thought of the unknown, is always exciting. What you cannot see, is more essential to you than what you can see.� Excellent work. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

Oh the rivers and oceans of the world's "blood stained history" would drown us all. And we never learn it seems. Powerful write, Bhuwan...Lin

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

There is nothing up there
-neither fame nor glory,
except the ugly facades
of the blood stained history.

Truly Profound, Bhuwan!