Heaven, bless my beloved nation!
And by virtue deified, let her not perish
to the horrendous howls of the tyranny.
This is not her destiny. Let the heifer,
graze on the pasture of democracy,
beside the murmur- of the freedom’s
stream. They- the poltergeists, who are
raping her authenticity, are traversing
on the false shimmer of the victory.
Blind they are now; they could not
disguise the concealed loss, and within
their own sphere, they spin- up and down,
down and up- right and left, left and right,
lured by the illusion of confusion, and the
confusion of illusion, as the drunken dancers,
who slap their weary legs, again and again,
on the shore - of the moment’s breast,
with regal pride, sparkling in their eyes,
parallel to the Everest of fire.
powerful and passionate. you write amazing poetry.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
Fantastic descriptions with a great message!
Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
Bhuwan, I've been watching your work for a few years now. God has a VERY speacial mission of the heart and soul that only you so deeply give to your country, your precious children and your world, indeed.. Your words speak so of ancient knowledge that yes, indeed we can all learn of love and justice...Thank you so much for your work and review...
Catherine...
nicely said. hope you and your family are all safe following the devastating earthquakes
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
many cry out now as the destruction of what is ensues...but hold your hopes high and pray for the survival of more through it all for the destruction of what IS brings on the creation of what is to come
A very moving soul-touching poem. Keep the flame of peace and democracy burning, let it not be put off by few disgruntled interest-oriented politicians. thanks for sharing this with us
Abdi-Noor
"Let the heifer,
graze on the pasture of democracy,
beside the murmur- of the freedom’s
stream."
Symbolically meaningful. May it be so, Bhuwan, my friend. Love and peace to you.
Bhuwan, I pray your voice and prayers are heeded! We need people of wisdom to speak out for the cause of justice in this present pall of confusion that is covering the entire world. You have described it so well, in this powerful beautifully written poem about the tragedy of your nation. Know that many are undergoing the same misery.Thank you for sharing and take care !
lured by the illusion of confusion, and the
confusion of illusion
ah, such tyranny exists in all the corners and countries of the world. I love the sure but free voice with which you make your wish for your country and her people, Bhuwan. she will not perish so long as one voice such as yours cries out in defense of her beauty and virtue. Dawn
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Well said.
Catherine...
:)
Gypsie
Abdi-Noor
graze on the pasture of democracy,
beside the murmur- of the freedom’s
stream."
Symbolically meaningful. May it be so, Bhuwan, my friend. Love and peace to you.
Regis
We join you in your plea, Bhuwan.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Strong love and powerful plea. Well written and definitely from the heart.
peace and love, Carole
Very powerful write
thanks for sharing
Hugs
Tina
Carmen :-)
God bless!!
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen
confusion of illusion
ah, such tyranny exists in all the corners and countries of the world. I love the sure but free voice with which you make your wish for your country and her people, Bhuwan. she will not perish so long as one voice such as yours cries out in defense of her beauty and virtue. Dawn