Life taught me
happiness
in the best
possible way-
by giving me
much misery
one after another
as the soaring
echelon of the
human pride,
that I always
anticipate more
but sometimes,
I get less
and that is
happiness for me.
Then you are happy indeed, although you truly deserve so much more, Bhuwan. But richness of spirit and soul are worth more than any world wealth or artificial accruals. So much of what we deem "necessary" in our western world is total dross. On the other hand, you are blessed with the most valuable and worthy of all treasures, beauty in your body, mind and spirit which shines out for all to see and travels with you wherever you go. These vestments money cannot buy. Individual, personal grace is worth more than an entire nation's vain pride. And it is sinful that ANY person is deprived of the basic essentials of food and water in a world that has such material superabundance in many quarters. A quiet and beautiful paradox in this poem that cuts me to the quick. You are, in fact, the epitome of humility. Bless you, wonderful man. LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
That's the story of life and of living, Bhuwan. We can either choose to happy or to be sad. You told this fact well. This is good poetry.
Great message, creatively delivered. I've always believed I was put here to experience everything once so I could help others deal with those same things later, which I believe is an extension of your 'by giving me misery' sentiment. If I can put my misery to good purpose, then everything is balanced and I'm happy.
I can see how misery would make you appreciate those moments of happiness more than if all your days were perfect. Let's hope though that your happy days become more frequent and your misery ridden days, less and less. ~ Sara
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
~Nikki~
Best wishes.
Patty
Love Tinka
You're always so precise in your poetry and that is what I like most about it. Life is an awesome teacher.
Love,
Eileen