Some one has
secretly kissed my hands,
and left in my core,
a seed of love.
Some one has
secretly stolen my tears,
and left in my eyes,
a fountain of hope.
Some one has
secretly caressed my hairs,
and left in my temple,
a crown of warmth.
Some one has
secretly read my poems,
and left in between the verses,
a fingertip of her smiles.
Some one has
secretly whispered in my ears,
and left in my mind,
a zephyr of waltz.
Some one has
secretly fragmented my years,
and left in my soul,
an eternal coy of youth.
Some one has
secretly sang my songs,
and left in the chorus,
a cadence of the wedding bells.
Ah! I know not, who is she.
I don’t know,
whether she is real
or just a fleeting reverie.
If you see her, my lord,
please tell her this:
I shall pluck a star
from the sky
and would lay it
in the pupil of her eyes
without clouding
the sky, and would
leave myself from me,
if I were to hold her
in my arms evermore.
That indefinable je ne sais quoi of sensing someone's eyes on you, and their shadow falling across your page.... you have defined, developped and paid tribute most admirably, Bhuwan. This goes beyond "love at first sight"... it is a love that transcends tangible presence and exists on a more ethereal plane - no less real for all of that. Beauty graces each and every line. Delicate and heartfelt. Bless you and TY Kate xx
Oh, this is so beautiful! Your creativity and shines. I like the drawing. Did you do it? I'm very critical of artwork so I usually don't comment on it, but this is very nice.
"Please tell her this" is bliss, Bhuwan. I could read this again and again and love it all the more every time. may you find her and tell her yourself. Dawn
Beautiful is such an inadequate word for this piece Bhuwan. It is ....amazingly beautiful..I agree with Joselyn,Sherry,Abdi, and Sandie. Peace, joy, love, and blessings my friend. Mikii
This is a stunning write, Bhuwan, I really love this. It is difficult to find a favorite line or stanza, but I think I would pick:
"Some one has
secretly stolen my tears,
and left in my eyes,
a fountain of hope."
What a wonderful blessing these words are. This one goes into my library to savor and read again and again.
Take care,
Sherry
WHo ever wins your heart would be blessed!!
Love tinka
Carmen :-)
"Some one has
secretly stolen my tears,
and left in my eyes,
a fountain of hope."
What a wonderful blessing these words are. This one goes into my library to savor and read again and again.
Take care,
Sherry
secretly sang my songs,
and left in the chorus,
a cadence of the wedding bells.
Great romantic poem.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)