AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Bob mitchley #shock stories, iSam Vaknin, iLloydene Hill, iPawan Mishra, iDean Cambourakis, i RickthePoetWarrior, iCharlene Proctor, iShannon MacLeod, iJohn Burns, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, i

  Home > Mainstream > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Bhuwan Thapaliya

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· Messages
· 697 Titles
· 10,025 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: May, 2004

Bhuwan Thapaliya, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!


Books by
Bhuwan Thapaliya







See all Books
by Bhuwan Thapaliya



No, no, my mother, you are not yet liberated.
by Bhuwan Thapaliya → (All Poetry by Bhuwan Thapaliya)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

Nepal! No, no, my mother,
you are not yet liberated.
Yes, yes, my mother,
freedom has just sprouted,
-and you are yet to be free.

Believe me,
the jackals are out there
lurking in the shadows
of the vultures.
They are waiting
- waiting for
the Sun to fade.
When the Sun fades,
they shall emerge out
in the open, then in
the darkness, they shall
attack and munch
your intestine again and again.

And then, O’ Mother!
They shall disappear
and shall emerge again,
and then shall disappear again,
and only, you shall be emancipated.

But O’ mother,
O’ my mother, beware!
The jackals are hungry now,
- they are sharpening their fangs,
a bad omen, a bad omen for us all.


Copyright 2007 Bhuwan Thapaliya

Pic source: www.frcreations.it
 

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "No, no, my mother, you are not yet liberated."
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
A powerful warning, Bhuwan!! Excellent write!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
wow!!! forcefull and power
and the draining but there is a will
and hope
great poetry here!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
The jackels of religious extremism wait for the fall of every poor country to take the freedom of lifeblood away.

Ron

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Very, very moving indeed!

Chrissy

Reviewed on January 20, 2007
A couragious voice for freedom...very moving

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
This rings of Freedom longing respected poet.

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

Outstanding composition... The bells of JUSTICE are crying out through the lines of "No, no, my mother, you are not yet liberated".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Freedom is a very fragile thing, Bhuwan, and it seems that there are always jackels lurking in the dark corners wanting to be the ones responsible for stripping us of it. Freedom is not free and it must be protected at all times or it will be lost forever. Very nice poem!
Take care,
Sherry


New Poetry by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Popular Poetry (Mainstream)
  1.  Nolan Xavier Wells
  2.  NINE/ELEVEN
  3.  Leadership: American Style
  4.  Flood
  5.  Fleeting Verse
  6.  Prayers for J. Allen
  7.  Losing You
  8.  The Arbitrage of Solitude
  9.  Intimacy
  10.  HORSE-SHIT !
  11.  STREAMS OF MEMORIES
  12.  Walls and Dreams
  13.  My Last Request
  14.  Rub Off
  15.  I Only Know...Once Again, We Mourn! Or
  16.  See Something, Say Something
  17.  My life, is this the end?
  18.  Future
  19.  Seasons Of Life
  20.  How are We Doing?
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Better Without You by Donna Lynch

'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.  
Member BookAds

Better Without You by Donna Lynch

'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.  
Member BookAds

Better Without You by Donna Lynch

'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.  
Member BookAds