I wish, I had
Wings to fly
To soar like birds
In the liberal sky
With no earthly
Constraints
And forever
Play with,
The heavenly clouds
And be at peace within
Far away from this
Hysterical scene
And shower the seed
Of love, like the rain
From the domicile of god
To prevail peace in the, “Earth”.
We fly as children and then must relearn again. Great!
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Dear Bhuwan, this isn't just a child's wish...but it is my wish for all children of the world. Stunning write - upsetting, and warming - sad, and hopeful. Thank You !
never give up on dreams, bhuwan...or your stunning writes. this is incredibly beautiful...excellently presented. looks like this young man has big dreams in his eyes...lovely picture and poem. great job, bhuwan! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Can I have wings too I want to fly also!! Great poem it was so touching in it's message of wanting to break free and have peace in this world I love this poem it ws so nice
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Bhuwan,
I love the picture is it you as a child.
Yes to flight of all of lifes wars famine and pain I too dream my dear friend this one touched me I go their often to escape and it is peaceful. Cheers this is so excellent!!!
love n luck Peggy
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
What a fantastic looking child....and I love the sentiment in this poem Bhuwan..very touching..floria
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
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Jill
I love the picture is it you as a child.
Yes to flight of all of lifes wars famine and pain I too dream my dear friend this one touched me I go their often to escape and it is peaceful. Cheers this is so excellent!!!
love n luck Peggy