Reduce yourself to zero
Estrange yourself from
The hallucination of
“I” and “Me”, for
We owe nothing
not even our soul,
when we perish
it too will leave us
like the bird that
leave their nests
and rises like the
breath into the air.
So, explore your life
With the heart of love
Sans an iota of
Repulsive thoughts
And shower the seed
Of compassion and
Heal the wound of
Humanity’s core
And make this Earth
A replica of Heaven above
Superb job you're doing there in your half of the world and with you sharing with he other half...you make my job a little easier my friend.
love, peace and harmny,
Susan
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
very inspirational though the picture was a little startling but of course you are an exceptional poet able to turn the most dark into the shining of light
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
What a lovely, loving path !
Reviewed by coni lea harris (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
"And shower the seed
Of compassion," loved these lines, this is the first of your work I have read, thanks you for reading my work and commenting,,,loved this piece, I think I'll read more of yours, seem to be so relating,,,cheers, coni lea
Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
I agree what an excellent write(:
Huggs
Lady G.
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
Excellent write..... if only one would read and listen!!!!
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A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
amazingly beautiful write
William
Love
tinka
Outstanding write once again....
Trixie :)
Chrissie x
love, peace and harmny,
Susan
Of compassion," loved these lines, this is the first of your work I have read, thanks you for reading my work and commenting,,,loved this piece, I think I'll read more of yours, seem to be so relating,,,cheers, coni lea
Huggs
Lady G.
Jack