If I were a God,
What would I do?
I'd make you immortal,
oh! My dearest love
And be always with you
Together and forever
In the warm corridor
Of your loves clutch
Singing the loves tune
From dusk till dawn
Along the divine hue
Of lovers pretty truce
If I were immortal
and you a mortal
what would I do?
I'd pray to the God
And beg him to
Make me mortal too
For I'd not wanted to
Be immortal sans you
But rather
I'd wanted to be mortal
And perish along with you
Though the life is long
it certainly would end
but though the love is short
it would never end
if you were not to love me
what would I do?
I'd changed your heart;
With Juliet's heart
And make you
Forever love me
Perpetually beneath the
Domicile of Gods
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Oh, you warm my heart and my soul and even my poor lil' ole' mind!
Love,
Richard Vallance
... with Juliet's heart, even in the face of certain death!
lovely write, bhuwan! thanks so much for your sweet review regarding my prose; it was really appreciated, and it was much needed! thanks ever so much! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) to you, bhuwan, and god bless your country and your people!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Beautiful as always Bhuwan...love the angels..Floria
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Love,
Richard Vallance
... with Juliet's heart, even in the face of certain death!
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