O sluggard (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

Indeed you are gifted......ty, Dani

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

I woke up!
Perfectly written, wonderful choice of words. Love that one.
S

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Oh my!!!
A call for mankind to carry on!!!
bravo!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Reminiscent of proverbs, an excellent motivational write full of wisdom Bhuwan!You are so gifted!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

This is excellent and I agree very powerful write!
hugs(:
Lady G.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Extremely powerful write that has been well done.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

(((Bhuwan)))
You have produced a flawless write of truth and wisdom my dear. You and Andre are ABSOLUTE WONDEROUS TEACHERS OF WISDOM AND TRUTH!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Bhuwam, I know someone who needs to read this!!!! Can I share it? This is so excellent....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Outstanding in every way!!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Wonderful language to appeal to the sleeping spirit within us all.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Now this is exactly what I needed to hear this early a.m.!! Very stirring!!! Another wonderful write, Bhuwan...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

truely enlightened! the spirit must be constantly invigorated...

(comatose sprit)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

This was classic, absolutely outstanding!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

WOW I Think that this write is sooo Great!!!
:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

I think I am awake now!!!

LOL.....This was a great wakeup call Bhuwan!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Wow, Bhuwan
Fantastic comments that are so correct! You my talented friend, always let your wisdom flow with the artistry of your pen!

tony

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

A magnificent poem, Bhuwan. Very thoughful.

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

wonderful poem! This is the first I have read of yours.... I look forward to reading more. Thank you for commenting on mine- I have just begun again as you may have noticed. This was beautiful, lifting, honest, and clear. I loved the art work as well.

Reviewed by Bill Murray

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Bhuwan .... go back and read my comment on
Ben'Yehu's last poem. ... there is a CASUAL NEXUS somewhere here and there. Bill Murray
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Bhuwan ... this is a prophetic Poem. I must speak to you because I can feel "The Voice" inside my Soul directing my words. Long before life you were ordained to be a majestic priest of the First Order. A Prince and a Champion of Justice and Love. Someday, during this lifetime, you will do a great deed ... leading others out of the hell that the "Evil One" will put them in. Millions will suffer and die. You are the one that will not die, but live to see your word the law of the land. You are preparing for your task well. Someone is guiding us at this site. It is the fine seer and poet: "Andre Bendavi Ben-YEHU." Listen to his words ... they are a guiding light out of the jungles of despair and loneliness. Here is a huge hail to "Bhuwan
Thapaliya" and our mentor: "Andre Bendavi Ben-YEHU." Both these seers who I am proud to call friends are giants amoung men. God bless you in all his tasks. Bill Murray