Our Love Is Ripe And Not It Must Decay (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wonderful and touching love poem.
S

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

Very deep thoughts written excellent.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Deep and insightful... thanks for sharing..
Jenni

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

that one line says so much.. makes me think. Excellent

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Excellant and deeply profound Bhuwan. Your poetry is always so inspiring no matter what the subject matter, and I enjoy every piece I get the chance to read!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

A wonderfully profound poem, Bhuwan
~Chrissie

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Such a deep and beautiful sentiment, so much wisdom behind the words, VERY WELL DONE, Bhuwan! This is not a "romatically popular" way to present your thoughts, especially to the "hearts and flowers" traditinalists,but, you know, sometimes the road less traveled is the ONLY road that makes sense for some ideas... Love this bit:
"The concluding bell of life tolls
Deeper than the sound of silence
Beyond this life, into the gates of death
For our love is ripe and now it must decay"

A challenging write, well done and I salute you!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

7-15-03

Excellent__

It Was Rotten To Begin With!

TRASK

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Excellent Bhuwan as always your unique style prevails!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

This is very deep and unique poem Bhuwan!!
You inspired me with this one!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Loved it! Not the normal way to look at it but it cannot be denied.