Finite Is The Moment (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2003

Just exquisite!

The last verse is the clincher, of course!

To enjoy its ephemeral chime

Bye for now,

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Live for the moment and I don't mean for today; Live just for this moment, don't let it slip away; Don't worry about the past for it's never what it seems; What's past could be only a very ugly dream; Don't think about tomorrow, it's not comin' anyway; For by the time it gets here; Tommorow is today....

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

7-19-03

Ain't Much Time Finite For any Of Us!

TRASK

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Amazing work once again Bhuwan!!! You always bring beauty to your poetry. Excellent!!!

*****Marlene*****

Reviewed by Hiren Shah

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

I have heard in spirituality that the word present is a gift and always remain in the present. I think the poet expresses the finite element beautifully.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Buwan,
I curtsy most humbley each time I have a chance to view your regal poetic words of truth and wisdom here on The Dens boards and today is another day like those of the past and the more of the future. May your poetic brilliance never stop!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Blink, gone! can be the moment. my sruggle in your words, are my words in your struggle. together we try to capture time at its best. "to enjoy its ephemeral chime." short but an in the brain write of might. G

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Very fine piece! You've captured time.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Loved it too!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Can I wash your feet, cook your dinner, etc. Your writing is amazing....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

This is the finest of Gems, Bhuwan! You are a master;-)!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

This was a very enjoyable read!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Wonderful thoughts and write.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

{{{BHUWAN}}}}
I sit at your feet poet friend....
each day I see your poetry laid
bare on the
dens lines... For here my sweet
Friend I find
Emotion, truths, wisdom and beauty
"

Time is infinite
But finite is the moment
And in every infinite time,
There is a finite moment
Struggling to liberate
From the grasp of its clutch
To enjoy its ephemeral chime "
I listen to the chime of your
hearts thoughts in this one.
CLAP CLAP {HUGS}}
Powerful my poet friend..
Love and Luck PJ

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Bhuwan...amazing talent you have:)

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Your chimes sound ssssooooooooooo nice.
Best wishes always
from
Kay

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Another good epigram this is..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

time explored perfectly...