I Pray To God (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

A beautiful prayer
Nico

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Yes Bhuwan it is so important to never lose the sense of your direction; for you know what is best for you. Bill Murray

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

uplifting beautifully written Bhuwan! You light up the Den with poems like this!Bravo!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

This is one of your gems!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Ya Can't Hope,Wish Nor Pray Brcause (God) Already Knew Anyway_

But, Ya Can Make Best What Ya Got, Ya Can Make Somebodys Life A Little Better Lot By A kind Word From Yor Thought's,i.e. (God) Already Knew In The Beginning What'd Ya Due In End!

Make Yor Amends Is True Prayer!!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Nicely said, Bhuwan... He hears us all i'm sure, why he only listens to the few i'll never know, well done for a great write, take care...Mark

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

A Gem of AWESEOME UPLIFTING MAGNITUDE!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

How lovely Bhuwan and very inspiring.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

A most beautiful prayer!
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Thank you, Bhuwan, for this beautiful, inspiring poem!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Really got to me with this one!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

A gem.Excellent, Bhuwan.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Hi Bhuwan,
What beautiful words
to start off my day...

Thank you for this my friend...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

~Excellent write and the
perfect pic to go with it.

Love 'n Luck
~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Toris Okotie

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

very spiritual, love it

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

What a wonderful little poem, Bhuwan. I pray this for us all.

Tami

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Stunningly beautiful my friend..Floreann *****

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

What more can i say...than take my hand and let us pray together

"I pray to God
That my heart
Never abstain from love
But in the stride of life
If I divert fortuitously
From the course of love
To the land of disgust
I pray to God
To forgive my soul
And drag me back
To the path of love
From where the journey
Towards the Heaven begins

Amen and Amen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Well written poetry.

tony

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Good Morning Bhuwan, I don't think your heart will abstain from love. The gold around it will keep it safe. This is beautiful as always.
*Marlene*

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Bhuwan, your wisdom prevails, beautiful poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

Love rules!
Best wishes always.
Excellent poem!
from
Kay