Waves Of Melancholy (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 6, 2003

Makes my heart ache. You capture this so well.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Exquisite and profound !

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Bhuwan, your case is made and the world is guilty, but that's just it, we can't just blame a few at the top,all of humanity shares the guilt, including those who are the victims.That is the true shame of it all!

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

lovely, throbbing with emotion and compassion.
Tarek

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Your poetry is magnificent..Floreann *****

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Powerful words and reality.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

An absolutely soulful and sad write Bhuwan!!

I am sick on my stomach...after looking at this heartbreaking pic!!

Dear Lord...I think death...would be a welcome moment for this poor child!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

A truly sad, profound piece. Exceptional.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Oh Bhuwan, how my heart aches. We can well imagine multiplying this child a thousand times, envisioning children/people around the world, every color, every race, in poverty and dire need! Yet, we waste and share not! Not even with the misfortunate or lonely people that share our own land. Not even a visit to a nursing home's occupants or a children's hospital. We'd rather buy, buy, buy useless trinkets and fill our days with gossip and unproductivity! Thank you, Bhuwan, for this outstanding poem and reality reminder!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

This is so heart-wrenching. An absolutely amazing write Bhuwan.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Awesome does not do this justice,
my friend. Outstanding write as
you do so well. This is one of
your best!

Love n luck
~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Oh Bhuwan... the words you weave, making me think. What a heartfelt, aching write! Thanks for this awakening and soulful reminder.

Tami

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Bhuwan,
you Poet are the humanitarian embassador of God this is so powerful excellent Poet.
Proud of you. love n luck Lady Peg

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

This was so powerful and so very sad, Outstanding Bhuwan,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Heartfelt and sad but artistic write, Bhuwan.
You make me think.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Powerful write, Bhuwan. You have such a keen mind.

Reviewed by Hiren Shah

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Spoken liket a true poet philosopher as usuual.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

the will to live is strong, for those who can not give it is their loss in the end.. we all need to step out side our comfort zone.. thank you for the awaking.. of picture and word

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Hi Bhuwan,
Wow...This pact a
one two powerful punch.
Hit's right into
the heart.

The photo is so
heartbreaking...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Profound write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Bhuwan, very soulful and sad write.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Oh Bhuwan, I am so speechless to make a coherent comment. How ashamed am I of myself for this. I could help more as could most people and this should not be happening. A lot of people like me and there are so many should be upset over this. THE CHILD IS ONE OF THE MANY
STARVING ... AND I AM ONE OF THE MANY
GUILTY BEFORE ANY TRIBUNAL AND ULTIMATELY
T0E ONE BEFORE OUR MAKER. Bill Murray ... Your friend. Thank you so much for sticking to the AD readers; though most of them may not feel a f...ing thing. I know sweet Trixie would agree with me.

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Utterly speechless, Bhuwan...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Very interesting perception Bhuwan. Enjoyed this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)