Obstacles we meet,
Affects our life
But love determines,
The course of our life
Thus, when someone loves you
Let yourself enjoy the ballet of love
And love them back absolutely
Not only because they love you
But because they have appreciated you
And you may never be able to experience it again
Because life is as uncertain as the velocity of the truth
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "When Someone Loves You"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Very well said
Let's pass this on to all men !!
Wonderful write
Nico
Obstacles we meet,
Affects our life
But love determines,
The course of our life
Thus, when someone loves you
Let yourself enjoy the ballet of love
And love them back absolutely
Not only because they love you
But because they have appreciated you
And you may never be able to experience it again
Because life is as uncertain as the velocity of the truth "
This is the truest write I've read! Thank you Bhuwan! for sharing your heart and soul with us...
In Spirit,
Bear
Bhuwan,
Very nice write, when loved enjoy, as life can change within the blink of an eye.
Glenna
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Bhuwan, your words are so right and so true! I love Trixie so much that I ache for her every moment. I do know what to do.
So much. How do you make someone understand? She doesn't even have to love me now. I love her anyway. Your friend Bill
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
So ture Bhuwan, life is uncertain.
Love takes a lot of cheerful giving.
I have written a chapter called I Am That, I Am in this inspirational compilation book by best-selling authors and wonderful people from all walks of life xox :-D (Its sister book is called Adventures In Manifesting - Success and Spirituality)
Let's pass this on to all men !!
Wonderful write
Nico
Reindeer
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
~Chrissie
Affects our life
But love determines,
The course of our life
Thus, when someone loves you
Let yourself enjoy the ballet of love
And love them back absolutely
Not only because they love you
But because they have appreciated you
And you may never be able to experience it again
Because life is as uncertain as the velocity of the truth "
This is the truest write I've read! Thank you Bhuwan! for sharing your heart and soul with us...
In Spirit,
Bear
love tinka
*Marlene*
Very nice write, when loved enjoy, as life can change within the blink of an eye.
Glenna
So much. How do you make someone understand? She doesn't even have to love me now. I love her anyway. Your friend Bill
Love takes a lot of cheerful giving.
Jenni
Tami