Alone, in this dreadful voyage of life
Reaping immortal fruits of pain and strife
In the mystical soggy nights, from time to time
Swept with confused struggle and flight,
Where innocent soul dies every night
Do you think the story of my life is right?
Alas! My life, rugged and uneven,
As is the smile upon my countenance
That has no slight or trivial influence
Of elevated thoughts; a sense sublime
With lofty outlooks, that burns like the fire
And leaves footprint on the sands of time
My dreams, an edifice, too large to fill
Alpha and Omega of all things
And so endless is the memory I retain,
Of infinite sorrow and eternal drain
Covering the Earth with hate and pain
Praising the strong but pulverizing the lean
My life, a prison within prison, shut up
from outside light, inseparably dark
Or false glitter, that so suddenly blazes,
And conduits the dark abyss of my soul, but
Towards the mouth of infernal hell
For me, life is only an illusionary peregrination
And an eternal odyssey in this microcosm,
That immolates our soul to reach its destination
Life, an insatiable traitor, slaughters its own creator
As if its resolution is to bring sinister
My life, a mere abstruse, showy but of little value;
So called emblem of challenge, is supple
Like the subterranean passage, dead leaf fell,
There did it rest, the way to my dusty death.
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "This So Called Life ( Revised )"
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
Look at all the people. This den is crowded because of your talent.
I see your going through something right now, hope it dosent get you down too much. I agree with Bill your expression brings out alot of emotions built up, and some that are being pondered a great deal.
Great write my friend, Your writes are REAL.
Hugs
Ch'erie
Your wisdom leaves more than footprints in the sand of time, my friend... it seeps like pure water, drop by sparkling drop, penetrating even the hardest of rocks. Thank you for this powerful, marvelous piece of your infinite talent, Bhuwan.
~Alexandra~
Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
yes insightful indeed, written in a feat of authentic poetic skills this is definitely a rewarding poem.
Excellent write my friend
a keeper for sure
as all your wonderful penned writes
William
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Bhuwan, your words have a magic life of their own. They takes live forms as I read and digest them. You showed brillance in this poem.
It flies in all directions; spreading emotions to all part of my soul. One day the world will recognize your work. Your friend Bill
Wow, Bhuwan you leave me speechless most of the time when I read your writes. You fill them with such vivid images and thought provoking lines that it takes me a bit to digest them. Another great write. Lisa
"Life an insatiable traitor slaughters its' creator", incredibly profound ..truth bursting forth as we on the sidelines watch and record. Excellent write Bhuwan. Awesome.
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"Murder isn't usually this
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Great write my friend, Your writes are REAL.
Hugs
Ch'erie
~Alexandra~
a keeper for sure
as all your wonderful penned writes
William
It flies in all directions; spreading emotions to all part of my soul. One day the world will recognize your work. Your friend Bill
~Chrissie
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Reindeer
....falling.
'This so called life' is indeed a beautiful poem.