I just want to be a footstep behind you (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

A very moving spiritual write. Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Interesting one. Makes me think.
Nico

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I am finding a million names tonight that I absolutely loooove reading! This the depth in this poetry takes my breath. You are a master in your own right!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

This is very beautiful. Great expression of emotion here! Great work.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Excellent poem,I wondered also if that last word 'screaming' may change to 'dreaming'...is it fiction? if not...I am sure you could stop her from screaming if you caught up to her and gave her a big hug...just a thought,I loved the poem,you always do such interesting writes.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

I love how you portay the imprisonment here, the message being that screaming is something only ourselves can control. But you are there in that persons realm, like a waiting angel.... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Bhuwan, I echo my Helen's sentiments. "A wondeful poem." I pray tht the Lady is fully aware of your deep love for her. She is so fortunate to have you as her love. No one else could say to her exactly the words you speak in tones of the rainbow. Well done my friend. Bill

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

An excellent moving poem. Love it.

Reviewed by VicToria Freudiger

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

This piece -+- the artwork are awesome! Congrats! You touched the soul. Love the photo! Do you believe in past lives?

Shalom,
VicToria

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Powerful poem.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

magnificent..Floreann

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Haunting and profound! Great write!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

very mysterious, filled with beauty and emotion! ~Z~

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A mysterious and very well done poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Bhuwan, both the poem and the photo are most intriguing. Well done.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

This is a moving piece. I can feel the
emotion behind it, its beauty and sadness.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A bewildering, pensive write - I can feel the longing. Well done, my friend.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

The eternal search for meaning. Very spiritual words. I was touched by this poem.

Carmen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

So many feelings evoked by this poem Bhuwan..great work..floria

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

The spirtual blending of souls represented by the physcial feeling of touch.Wonderful write BHUWAN.May your journey always bring you to place of understanding yourself and others better my friend.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Beautiful writing, Bhuwan, torn from the heart.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Brilliant journey for the mind. Bravo.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Beautiful poem -- so moving, yet so comforting. Oh, how I can relate.
Thanks, Bhuwan.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

I feel kinda connected to this one....beautiful moving words Bhuwan!!

My last few poems are filled with the same kind of emotions!!

Love & hugs Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

excellence in subtle intensity...

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Bhuwan, this is an interesting and heartfelt write! Line 13~"..I just want to be a footstep behind you.." is simply wonderful! In all honesty this poem exubes a spiritual feel to it, meanwhile, being mysteriously floaty~thank you for sharing your poetry! :=)