It takes tons of time to compose an ounce of poetry
But when it is composed it surpasses the eternity
Its connotation like the four seasons of the earth
May change from time to time, its authenticity
Like the existence of the deity will be questioned
From time to time, its manifestation like the
Symphony of clouds will be misunderstood from
Time to time, but its universal consensus
Like the perpetual soul, will forever live on,
And its grandeur, like the countenance of the sun
Will forever shine on…will forever shine on.
A grandly appraised view of the poetic theme as eternal sweet friend, btw,
here pagan was submitted Oct 31st, so some of the significance is lost as AD records it 30th
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Bhuwan the message here is universal....and what a feeling it is to finish a poem and put your name at the bottom of it...like giving birth....loved this so much...floria
I consider myself lucky tonight. I logged on finding your poem at the top of the list. :-) You said it all in this one!! Have a nice evening wise friend.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
Nice message. Hope it will forever shine.
Shine on !
Nico
Excellent piece!
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Many Blessings,
Libby
You summon from your poems. Thank you
Happy Halloween.
Taylor
Shine on my friend!!
Love Tinka
This is an exquisite write - the words flowed splendidly and touched me deeply. Loved this! Shine on, My Friend, Shine on...
Hugs,
Tami
wise beauty here...
here pagan was submitted Oct 31st, so some of the significance is lost as AD records it 30th
I consider myself lucky tonight. I logged on finding your poem at the top of the list. :-) You said it all in this one!! Have a nice evening wise friend.
Marlene